It's down to 11.7 pages. And that's with some additions to clarify previously obscure points, and with all the tiny illustrative figures retained. There's not much deadwood left, but I think there's still lots of sentences we can shorten and maybe even cut.
I've also been going through the figures for the Appendix, making them clearer and adding 'Conclusion' boxes.
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